Pana Topoonyanont
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I'm writing new lyrics but I'm not sure if the following sentences are correct or not...
1. "When you're near, I feel so warm." << Is this one OK? it sounds ok in my opinion though.
2. Should I say "You are near, when I'm afraid." or "When you are near, I'm afraid." or neither are correct (I want it to sound like she's always beside me when there's something makes me afraid, but I want the word "near" and make the sentence get shorter).
Thank you so much
1. "When you're near, I feel so warm." << Is this one OK? it sounds ok in my opinion though.
2. Should I say "You are near, when I'm afraid." or "When you are near, I'm afraid." or neither are correct (I want it to sound like she's always beside me when there's something makes me afraid, but I want the word "near" and make the sentence get shorter).
Thank you so much