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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
CurrentlyToday/Nowadays, music has beenis an integrated part of our life , whereand it is common to see people wear headphones, carrying an Ipod or a mp3 player on their hands whereever they are. It also exerts a multitude of beneficial functions Music has many beneficial effects on us both physically and psychologically. Meanwhile At the same time, people place varying weights different emphasis on the importance of conventional as well as international music and global one.As far as I am concerned, these two kinds of music both play irreplaceable roles in our society in terms ofthe cultural and social aspects.
Music has been long long been establishing its indispensable status playing its role in the different aspects of people’s life
with multiple effects. To begin with, some forms of music, like country music or simply instrumental music, can smooth thetense nerves and refresh tired souls. It is one of the best means that people canfor people to attain torestore/refresh/rejuvenate themselves after a whole day of busy work. Also, music provides people with solutions is known to be a form of remedy to heal certain diseases. Due to the synthetic synergistic effects of music and SPA, the condition of people with some chronic psychological diseases and their physical performance can be immensely significantly improved, which allows provides another alternative form of treatment to forthe patients with almost no side effects, compared to the pure chemical medicinetreatment with medicine. Thus, people are keen on living with the companion availing themselves to the therapeutic effects of music.
As to the importance of vernacular music and its international counterpart, they are equally imperative important in the advancement of our society. Not only can conventional music
canreflect the cultural diversity of different races, butit can also unify people from the same origin. This is why people always perform their traditional music induring their distinctive ethic festivals and the tune of thisthe music always reminds people of their roots. Therefore, vernacular music serves a role more than simply music plays a greater role than music per se, but is a symbol of anthe ethic identity of a country.
With respect toGlobal music , it reveals a wayserves as a form of communication between different countries. Nowadays, trendy music like R&B or Rap can be heard in every corner of the world, which shows people have theequal opportunities to access tothe latest development of in music and share the common theme. As such, music has overcome the language and geological geographical barriers and has become the truly global language between different countries.
In conclusion, music serves multifunction multiple
purposesfunctions regarding to theincluding theentertainment, recreational and medical effectsaspects, which is necessitatedin people’s lifelives. MeanwhileAt the same time, traditional musicand international music are both crucial vital/important to our society on the ground thatfor the reasons that vernacular music is the symbol of a country, while international music is a means of communication between countries.
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