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    transcripts correction 02

    Hi, teachers.

    Could you help me to correct the following transcripts of the attached records?

    It's quite difficult for me.

    Thank you in advance.

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    And the military certainly needs the help of the local population, especially in the wild Kabylie region, home of the Berber people and current feat??? of the Islamists.

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    Since joining the Al-Qaeda ???, Algerian Islamists have changed their tactics. They have ??? most sophisticated, carrying out bloody suicide attacks and setting off bombs simultaneously in many different parts of the country.They post ??? internet video to the young man prepared to kill themselves for their faith. The latest, a film of the man who blew up himself and about ten other people at the Lacdaria army barracks shows the ??? ???? to use, posing in the forest with a rocket launcher as if it were a new toy.

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    And even more incredible is the bar at the top of the mountain run by a long hair (OR long haired OR long-hair OR long-haired?) wild-eyed (what does wild-eyed mean?) Berber, nicknamed after the Hollywood muscleman, John Claude Van Dam. He is carved in genius clarion after the forest, where people conceit and enjoy their beer surrounded by lashed green vegetation. For the more adventurers, he is even building (OR has even built?) a drinking platform at the top of the tree. Men lolled around in various stages of ???.

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    Helicopters ??? the hillsides ...
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    Re: transcripts correction 02

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    And the military certainly needs the help of the local population, especially in the wild Kabylie region, home of the Berber people and current feat??? fief of the Islamists.

    Fief: a piece of land held under the feudal system.

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    Re: transcripts correction 02

    Quote Originally Posted by enydia View Post

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    Since joining the Al-Qaeda franchise, Algeria's Islamists have changed their tactics. They have become most more sophisticated, carrying out bloody suicide attacks and setting off bombs simultaneously in many different parts of the country. They post slick internet videos to of the young man men prepared to kill themselves for their faith. The latest, a film of the man who blew up himself and about ten other people at the Lacdaria army barracks, shows a rosy-cheeked youth to use, posing in the forest with a rocket launcher as if it were a new toy.


    Amendments above.

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    Re: transcripts correction 02

    Quote Originally Posted by enydia View Post

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    And even more incredible is the bar at the top of the mountain run by a long hair (OR long haired OR long-hair OR long-haired wild-eyed (what does wild-eyed mean?) Berber, nicknamed after the Hollywood muscleman, John Claude Van Damme. He's carved in genius ingenious clarion clearings after out of the forest, where people conceit can sit and enjoy their beer surrounded by lashed lush green vegetation. For the more adventurers adventurous, he is even building he's even built a drinking platform at the top of the a tree. Men lolled around in various stages of inebriation.
    Wild-eyed means that his eyes have a sort of staring or even perhaps slightly crazy appearance!

    Ingenious - very clever, very inventive

    Clearings - areas where the trees have been removed

    Inebriation - a state of drunkenness (being drunk on alcohol)

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    Re: transcripts correction 02

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    Helicopters strafe the hillsides ...
    Strafe: To attack with a machine gun or cannon from a low-flying aircraft

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    Re: transcripts correction 02

    Thank you very much, Teacher Emsr2d2.

    I have another piece of transcript.

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    For now , Al-Qaeda and the Islamic Maghrebs is largely confining itself to attacking the military although there have been some exceptions like the recent bombing of an amusement ??? ...
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    Re: transcripts correction 02

    Quote Originally Posted by enydia View Post
    Thank you very much, Teacher Emsr2d2.

    I have another piece of transcript.

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    For now , Al-Qaeda and the Islamic Maghrebs (singular) is largely confining itself to attacking the military, although there have been some exceptions like the recent bombing of an amusement arcade ...

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    Re: transcripts correction 02

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Amendments above.
    Since joining the Al-Qaeda franchise ...
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    What does this clause mean?

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