Can anyone say anything in school is not beneficial? No one can say that.Benefits of Staying in School
(That's a gross over-exaggeration. Being bashed up by bullies every lunch hour and humiliated by insecure teachers is not beneficial. One could also mention some of the religious propaganda that is taught in schools, which in some cases is quite dangerous.)
Education is very important in today’s life; it is needed almost everywhere in every skill. The important benefits of staying in school are career development and helping in routine daily life.
One important benefit of staying in school is career development. [You just said that]
The fact that students are building a career for the rest of their life is the main reason for staying in school. When they are in school, students get [gain] knowledge of math, reading, writing and other technical skills. That improves their chance
while theyof are getting a lucrative job. Students canhave a greater possibility of earning a high salary and a comfortable job. The job field has always remained requirement for graduation from school.No, it's the other way round.
"The job market has always been more open to those who have graduated from school."
During school education, students should create a strong connection with their teacher to give themselves an advantage when beginning [?] to find jobs. They can write down their teacher’s name as a reference. That is an advantage.
The second important benefit of staying in school is in our routine daily life. We can communicate in cultural activities, social gatherings, and meeting others at public places. School connects students [?] with other people from different communities and countries. We can communicate in a better way with
theforeign people. EitherIf/when we visit stores, schools, hotels, government offices or hospitals, we will be able to present ourselves perfectly and properly if we have the appropriate knowledge. We can live happily and enjoy a longer life. For example, one of my uncles is a business man. He had heart attack. He had a good job so he had money. He tookreceived treatment and didhad bypass surgery. He is still alive and lives hisa happy life.
In conclusion we can say that there are lots of benefits of staying in school which we can’t even calculate. Career development helps to build our bright future and also helps us in our daily routine life in different ways which are two main benefits of staying in school. I will say that those who drop out of school are fools.
[I would say that those who choose to drop out of school are making a foolish decision.]
Again, an unnecessarily strong opening statement which is beside the point.
Your argument is about how staying at school is beneficial - not about how there is nothing non-beneficial in schools.
You need to work on your articles, especially 'a'.
Student or Learner