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    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) Countries included in the reciprocal driver's exchange licence agreement are such as Malaysia, Canada, Uk and etc.
    2) Malaysia is included in the driver's licence exchange agreement between Ontario and other countries.

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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post

    1) Countries in the reciprocal driver's exchange licence driver's licence exchange agreement include Malaysia, Canada, Uk (the) UK and etc.

    2) Malaysia is included in the driver's licence exchange agreement between Ontario Canada and other countries.
    Notes: word order is important. In your second sentence you called it the "Driver's licence exchange agreement" which I believe is correct. You had swapped over "licence" and "exchange" in the first sentence.

    Ontario is not a country, therefore you can't say "Ontario and other countries".

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