Manager said me that I need write good ad 4 his bussuiness. What is good out of two.
We place your money in our pocket or this of the two We place in our pocket your money
Both are horrible. It sounds like you steal from your customers.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.