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    Manager said me that I need write good ad 4 his bussuiness. What is good out of two.
    We place your money in our pocket or this of the two We place in our pocket your money

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    Re: sentence

    Both are horrible. It sounds like you steal from your customers.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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