Please teaacher check if I have any mistakes and add on to my work thank you very muchOne day while I was walking downstairs I saw a mysterious white pale box which said on it ‘I promises to bestow upon its owner $1 million with the press of a button. So when I got excited and pressed the button, it said to me ‘James Cardliff eliminated’. I got petrified and put it in the wardrobe.
So when I was watching news, the reported said ‘That a man by the name James Cardliff has died, Doctors say the cause was unknown’. When I found out it was the name it said on my box, I was terrified. So i knew that this box can kill people instantly with a touch of a button. The next day I went to my friend which was an electrician to see if he can find who made this and why he threw it in my house.
So he went in my room and when he came out he said that he is planning to kill more then 1500 people with this device. Then I asked him’ How does it kill?’ He said I don’t know. So I knew this man anted this box and threw it in my house for no reason, this was a very valuable box to him. Then when I was putting the box in its case I saw another paper which said meet me at Ashburton near the Park on Thursday. So my friend and I found out that he gave it to me because my house was identical to the other friend of his.
Then on Wednesday, We called the Police and told them about this issue, they said that they will be glad to help. When we went there they were discussing about my friend’s father and when are they going to kill him. At that moment the police said ‘put your hand behind your head and later we discovered that the person who made this box was the man who was checking the ruins of James Cardliff. So at the end of the day, my friend and I received a certificate for resolving this case.
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