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    checking of four sentences

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to edit the following four sentences?

    It is way to imagine yourself the impression these words, pronouncing in such a thunderous voice, rendered on a nervous, mystically and exalted boy. It was like a flash of lighting and a clap of thunder. I felt to the ground nd lost conscious…

    When I came to me I saw my father and mother bent over me asking a blessing.

    Thank you for your efforts.

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    Re: checking of four sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by vil View Post
    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to edit the following four sentences?

    It is way to imagine yourself the impression these words, pronouncing in such a thunderous voice, rendered on a nervous, mystically and exalted boy. I'm afraid I can't make any sense of this sentence at all!

    It was like a flash of lightning and a clap of thunder. I fell to the ground and lost consciousness

    When I came to, me I saw my father and mother bent over me asking a blessing.

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V.
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