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    Kindly check the sentences

    Fake money can come from across the border, but they can never cross the radar of Kores Fusion

    Now no fake currency can incur loss to you in your business.

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences

    **Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.**

    This is how I would have written it:
    (If I were you )

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Fake money can come from across the border, but they it can never cross the radar of Kores Fusion.

    Now no fake currency can incur loss to you in your business.
    I hope I'm right

    P.S: I don't like the Now in sentence 2, what do you guys think?

    Cheers!

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