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    scott833 is offline Senior Member
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    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that make customer think that everything in their stores are cheap and affordable.
    2) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that create an illusion/impression that cheap and affordable.
    3) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that arouse/stimulate the feeling the affordability and cheapness in customer towards their product.

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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences? 1

    Please use distinct titles for distinct requests; another Moderator may well delete some of your posts as duplicates. If so, post them again with titles that identify them.

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