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  1. #1
    felliot is offline Newbie
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    Red face please help me!

    Hello everybody,
    I have to send as soon as possible this mail and I need to know if it is correct.
    Could you please please please please correct it?
    THANKs A LOT!!!!

    "To the kind attention of xx,
    Dear Sir xx,
    My name is xx, I am an Italian undergraduate student at the University of xx.
    I have won the International Scholarship that gives financial aid and allows Italian students of rm to study a semester at your university , according to the bilateral agreement that your university has signed with university of rm.
    I am writing you to ask for informations.
    The Scholarship Department of Rm told me that I have to contact you to refine/complete the procedure of acceptance and registration at your university.

    Could you please tell me how can I do this?
    What document I have to fill, concerning this bilateral agreement?

    Thank you for your time and consideration.


    Best regards,"

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    Liudmila777 is offline Newbie
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    Re: please help me!

    Hi. English is not my native language, but if you are still interested I would slightly amend your letter:

    Dear Sir/Madam (if you don't know them) or
    Dear Mr.Wilson (or whatever his/her surname is, if you know it)

    I am writing to ask for some information regarding acceptance into University of xxxx. The Scholarship Department of Rome told me that I have to contact you.

    My name is xxxx. I am an Italian undergraduate student of xxxx. I have won the International Scholarship which provides financial aid for students of Rome. Italian students can study a semester at your university according the bilateral agreement.

    I would be grateful if you could help me and explain in more details what documents I have to fill in and what is the general procedure.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully (if you don't know them)
    Yours sincerely (if you know them)



    Your Name and Surname

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Re: please help me!

    Looks good. A few minor suggestions. Good luck.

    "To the kind attention of xx,
    Dear Sir xx,
    My name is xx, I am an Italian undergraduate student at the University of xx.
    I have won the International Scholarship that gives financial aid and allows Italian students of rm to study a semester at your university , according to the bilateral agreement that your university has signed with University of rm.
    I am writing you to ask for informationThe Scholarship Department of Rm told me advised that I have to contact you to refine/complete the procedure of acceptance and registration at your university.

    Could you please tell me how can I might do this?
    What document(s) I have to fillare required for me to complete and submit concerning this bilateral agreement?

    Thank you for your time and consideration.
    Last edited by billmcd; 12-May-2010 at 00:47. Reason: typo

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    felliot is offline Newbie
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    Re: please help me!

    Thank you very much for your help! :)

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