Can someone proofread this commerical ad speech? It's going to be a 30sec AD. This is actually my first time making a commerical speech.
Are you looking for a course but still aren't accepted in?
Well here at Southbank Tafe we will gladly accept you into our campus!
Our programs will help you get into university, get a job or improve your skills.
To find out more or to enroll just simple call us on 1800 654 447.
Are you looking for a course but still aren't accepted in?- but still haven't got a place/been accepted
we will gladly accept you into our campus!- we will gladly accept you!
just simple call - simply call