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    peter2124 is offline Newbie
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    Notice of Receipt

    Hello, Please advise me if the heading & phrasing is correct, im not to sure if it sounds ok,

    Thanks


    Notice of receipt,

    The undersigned certify that I received on …………at………..hrs from....... the following items in excellent condition.

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    Re: Notice of Receipt

    Quote Originally Posted by peter2124 View Post
    Hello, Please advise me if the heading & phrasing is correct, im not to sure if it sounds ok,

    Thanks


    Notice of receipt,

    The undersigned certify that I received on …………at………..hrs from....... the following items in excellent condition.
    It might be better as: "I, the undersigned, certify that I..."

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    peter2124 is offline Newbie
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    Re: Notice of Receipt

    Thank you bhaisahad it deffinitely sounds better!

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