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My essay about New York :

New York is a very attractive city of America. First, the Statue of Liberty is modern marvel and national monument that symbolizes independence, friendship and democracy. The national monument allows people to study America’s independent history and provided a spectacular view of the harbor. Second, New York’s Museum of Modern Art is one of the most influential museums of modern art in the world. It attracts visitors with the display of both modern and contemporary arts that enable them to explore evolution of arts and culture diversity. Third, New York’s Central Park which were both public urban park and “green lung of New York city”. People that visit the Central Park able to enjoy a lot of recreation activities and natural scene at the park. The mentioned landmarks make New York City unique.

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