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    Tan Elaine is offline Key Member
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    correct choice of words

    With the guidance from the priest etched in our minds/hearts, let us do our best to propagate ABC religion.

    Is the part in bold correct? Should it be 'hearts' or 'minds'? If the sentence is not correctly phrased, please rewrite it for me.

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    PlacidRan is offline Senior Member
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    Re: correct choice of words

    With the guidance from the priest etched in our hearts, let us do our best to propagate ABC religion.

    Or, like this: With the guidance from the priest etched in our hearts and minds, let us do our best to propagate ABC religion.

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