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    Cool crisscrossing one's life

    Is it good English?

    After trying to commit suicide, a man is back home. "Then, two women crisscross his life."

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    Re: crisscrossing one's life

    It's not clear what it means by crisscross. I can't work out how the women affect his life.

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    Cool Re: crisscrossing one's life

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    It's not clear what it means by crisscross. I can't work out how the women affect his life.
    These two women appear in his life when he's so depressed after being quitted by his girlfriend, and they will split his will. One is on the wild side, the other is girl next-door-like, all security and comfort.

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