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    Kindly check this sentence

    There canít be a better gift than diamond jewellery, for any occasion. Imagine the look on your loved ones face when they unwrap special gift & find a sparkling, elegant piece of diamond jewellery

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    #2

    Re: Kindly check this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    There can’t be a better gift than diamond jewellery, for any occasion. Imagine the look on your beloved one`s face when they unwrap special gift & find a sparkling, elegant piece of diamond jewellery

    Nice description !
    I guess that the rest is fine!

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    Re: Kindly check this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    There canít be a better gift than diamond jewellery, for any occasion. Imagine the look on your loved one's face when they unwrap the special gift and find a sparkling, elegant piece of diamond jewellery
    R.

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