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    Nightmare85 is offline Senior Member
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    Is this sentence ok?

    Hello,
    Today I imagined this sentence:
    The problem is, that you, as an outsider, don't know what actually happened in our relationship.

    Is this sentence good?
    I'm not fully sure if "in our relationship" is correctly placed.

    Cheers!

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Re: Is this sentence ok?

    Looks OK to me.

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    Re: Is this sentence ok?

    Quote Originally Posted by Nightmare85 View Post
    Hello,
    Today I imagined this sentence:
    The problem is, that you, as an outsider, don't know what actually happened in our relationship.

    Cheers!
    I would remove the comma after "is".

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    Re: Is this sentence ok?

    Me too.
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    Re: Is this sentence ok?

    Quote Originally Posted by beachboy View Post
    Me too.
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    Me too! Other than that, I can see no problem with this sentence.

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