Iīve been asked to write a paragraph titled The Golden Age of Female Singers. please tell me if this is correct thanks in advanced.
The 21st century is The Golden Age of Female Singers. Since at least a decade ago women have broken the chains and become more independent in every aspect of life, in early times women had to ask for permission for almost everything, nowadays they do as they want, wear whatever they like, this is well shown in female singers. while before there were mostly men who where at the tops of every ranking in the world, we have now female megastars like Alexandra Burke, Lady Ga Ga, Beyoncee and many others who are at the top of their careers driving their fans crazy at their gigs with their incredible voices and excentrics outfits. It is fantastic the way in which women have reveled and said to the world that this is our time to shine.
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