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plz check the error in the following statement-:

today me and my friend are going to do party,we bought 1 kg chicken and gave it to aunty to prepare.after sometime we will go to market and purchase 4 beer and some snacks.then finally we will sleep.
 

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plz check the error in the following statement-:

Today, my friend and I are going to have a party. We bought 1kg of chicken and gave it to Aunty to prepare. After some time, we will go to the market and purchase 4 (bottles of) beer and some snacks. Then finally we will sleep.
You're going to sleep before the party? Or have you left out the party?
 
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