[Grammar] when I studied at

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uktous

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Hi,

Question:
[STRIKE]In my cover letter, I mention "when I studied at ABC University" too often.[/STRIKE]
Is there any sentence/clause that can substitute "when I studied at ABC University" ?


Original sentence:
When I studied at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.


Rewritten sentence1:
During my study time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.

Rewritten sentence2:
During my studying time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.

Rewritten sentence3:
Your verison.

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uktous

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Yes, there are many. You could use-
When I was a student at ABC University, I was selected to grade exam
papers.
As a student at ABC University, I graded examination papers.
I graded examination papers while I was at ABC University.

I believe that you are relying on "study" too much. There are other words that fit better.


"I believe that you are relying on "study" too much. There are other words that fit better."


Yes.
Could you please suggest any words ???
 
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