uktous
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 7, 2009
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Japanese
- Home Country
- Japan
- Current Location
- UK
Hi,
Question:
[STRIKE]In my cover letter, I mention "when I studied at ABC University" too often.[/STRIKE]
Is there any sentence/clause that can substitute "when I studied at ABC University" ?
Original sentence:
When I studied at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence1:
During my study time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence2:
During my studying time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence3:
Your verison.
Thanks
Question:
[STRIKE]In my cover letter, I mention "when I studied at ABC University" too often.[/STRIKE]
Is there any sentence/clause that can substitute "when I studied at ABC University" ?
Original sentence:
When I studied at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence1:
During my study time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence2:
During my studying time at ABC University, I was select to mark exam papers.
Rewritten sentence3:
Your verison.
Thanks