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    sondra is offline Member
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    A formal letter (Please answer me as soon as possible.)

    Hello,

    I have to write a formal letter to WSPA( world society for the protection of animals) and IFAW(international fund for animal welfare) but I am not sure that my letter is correct I have never written a formal letter before. Could you please correct it?


    My aim is to inform people about a terrible fact of shooting homeless animals. It is the government`s decision. It takes place in Batumi, Georgia. There are no shelters for them here.
    Please help to stop the violence.

    I think it sounds excessive. Should I use another word instead of "violence", and where should I place "please" to make the sentence polite.
    I think there are mistakes in my questions too.

    Thank you.

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Re: A formal letter (Please answer me as soon as possible.)

    My aim is to inform people about a terrible fact practice of shooting homeless animals. It is the government`s decision. It takes place in Batumi, Georgia. There are no shelters for them here.
    Please help to stop this inhumane practice.

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