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    Please check my para...

    So you though that owing gold jewellery is a distant dream for you? Poley has proved you wrong. Pure savings by popley is a special investment scheme designed so you can plan systematically about fulfilling your dreams

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    Re: Please check my para...

    **Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.**

    Hello,
    May I try?

    So you thought that owning gold jewellery was a distant dream for you? Poley has proved you're wrong. Pure savings by popley are a special investment scheme designed so that you can plan systematically about fulfilling your dreams.
    (Is it "Poley" or "Popley"?)

    I hope some teachers or other members will say something, so we can see if see if my idea is good

    Cheers!

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    Re: Please check my para...

    Quote Originally Posted by Nightmare85 View Post
    **Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.**

    Hello,
    May I try?

    So you thought that owning gold jewellery was a distant dream for you? Poley has proved you're wrong. Pure savings by popley are a special investment scheme designed so that you can plan systematically about fulfilling your dreams.
    (Is it "Poley" or "Popley"?)

    I hope some teachers or other members will say something, so we can see if see if my idea is good

    Cheers!

    Thanks for your kind help...indeed its popley only my typo error....all i want to know if i committed any grammatical error..and you have helped me to rectify that .

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