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    #1

    Smile Please correct this

    "Clicia is a Vietnamese. He hates almost everyone he met and find another world where he can feel happy. He separated himself from the society and became two personalities, one for the real world and one for the other, each have a different name. Clicia's hobby is anime, manga, book, light music, mystery, programming..."

    please find if there's any mistake and suggest other ways to make this paragraph better.

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    #2

    Re: Please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by Pepperoni Papaya View Post
    "Clicia is a Vietnamese. He hates almost everyone he met meets OR he has ever met, and wants to find another world where he can feel happy. He separated himself from the society and became two personalities, one for the real world and one for the other, each having a different name. Clicia's hobbies are anime, manga, books, light music, mystery, programming..."

    please find if there's any mistake and suggest other ways to make this paragraph better.
    See above.

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