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    please correct this

    She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work

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    Re: please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by foodie View Post
    She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work
    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    Good morning, Foodie:

    Maybe something like:

    During the school holidays, Mary was able to rest at home. Now that

    school has resumed, she is once again busy with her teaching duties and

    the usual household chores.

    Have a nice day!

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    Re: please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by foodie View Post
    She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work
    She went back to work this week. She's a teacher but it had been the school holidays so she'd been at home having a good rest. Normally, she's busy with household chores and work.

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