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    exam paragraph

    Please correct also make it short and clearer
    How were Exams?
    Ok But I really had tough time giving these exams First of all these exams are on weekends and on the last day of exams My Dad's bike tyre got punchered Thanks God I luckily managed to get a Cab and I reached 10mins before the exams,then when the exams started they electricity was going off and on in between when we were writing the paper.

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    Re: exam paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by foodie View Post
    Please correct also make it short and clearer
    How were Exams?
    OK, but I really had a tough time giving doing these exams. First of all, these exams are on weekends and on the last day of exams, my Dad's bike tyre got punctured. Thank God, I luckily managed to get a cab and I reached the venue 10 minutes before the exams. Then when the exams started, the electricity was going off and on in between when we were writing the paper.
    You need to use a period at the end of each sentence, not just at the end of the paragraph.

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