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    hotspicy is offline Banned
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    please correct this para

    Please correct this para and please help me to make it much short and clearer at advance level:
    You had mangoes, this is mango season. we have a mango garden in my hometown but my garndmom is partial she will never send it to us but will always send it to her son so we order for it from other place.My mom likes mangoes so much that she eats 4-5 boxes alone and then she will say i am getting heat boils but still she wont stop eatig them.I eat only 2 to 4 mangoes in the whole season otherwise i will get all heat boils on my faceas as mango fruit has lot of heat in it.We have our own Jackfruit and Coconut trees and they bear a good amount of Jackfruits and Coconuts .My dad he calls someone to pluck them and we sell off the jackfruits.I mean we don't sell it but people come to our place to buy them,they are so famous.You like Jackfruits
    Last edited by hotspicy; 06-Jun-2010 at 19:11.

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    Re: please correct this para

    Your grandma eats four or five boxes of mangoes at a sitting?

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