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    #1

    Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    My name is ... I'm interested the vacancy for work experience.

    I've studied mostly by myself web development but I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate, also I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.
    I would like to improve my work experience and also my computer knowledge.

    I'm a 24 years old Hungarian boy. After I've finished my high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could make my first work experience. My goal was there, I can save enough money for my studies and I could learn english. After I done an English academic year course.

    I would like to reach a serious knowledge on this area in the future.
    I hope I get a chance I could start to improve my knowledge even if I just help to others make their work for easier.

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    #2

    Re: Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    Hi,

    I changed your letter a bit :)

    Good luck,
    Inna.

    My name is ... and I'm interested in the vacancy in Name_Of_The_Firm as a Job_Title.

    I'm a highly motivated 24 year old web specialist. Being in the beginning of my way, I have the strongest intent to keep improving my knowledge and experience in the field of web development.

    After graduating high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could gain my first work experience. My goal was also to save enough money for English studies. Later on, I have successfully completed a one year English academic course. Dedication, persistence and diligence guided me all along the way of my studies.

    My professional education brief summary : in **** (year) I've graduated a junior PHP course and I received a PHP certificate. Also, I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.

    I will highly appreciate, if you give me a chance to offer my services as a loyal and responsible worker.

    Sincerely yours,
    name_and _signature.

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    #3

    Re: Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate, also I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.

    Which certificates do you have? How qualified are you?

  3. #4

    Re: Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    I've studied mostly by myself web development but I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate,
    I have studied web development largely on my own, but I have also graduated from a junior PHP course and hold a PHP certificate.

    (Is there such a thing as a PHP certificate?)

  4. #5

    Re: Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    I'm a 24 years old Hungarian boy. After I've finished my high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could make my first work experience.
    I am a 24-year-old male from Hungary. After finishing high school, I had my first work experience in Liverpool, England.

  5. #6

    Re: Can You check my letter please? Thank You

    My goal was there, I can save enough money for my studies and I could learn english.
    My goals there were to save enough to continue my studies, and to learn English.

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