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Last month you bought a new SONY camera ,but it stopped working after two weeks .
im wondering if any one could write for me its a formal letter
ok but would you help me if it was silly ! cuz i dont know how to write !
ok sorry my first time
Dear sir ,
Last month I bought a new sony camera from virgin mega store , and after 3 weeks of not using the camera , I decided to open the camera and take some pictures for my family and friends
of course, I verified it works but Unfortunately when I tried to open it , the camera is was not working
I thought it might be due to the battery being down but after inserting new batteries, it is still not working, although I didnít take a single picture from the camera , My family and I are very disappointed after seeing its result and facing the worst experience of our life with a branded product bought from your shop.
I hope you will consider my complaint with due seriousness it deserves and I expect you not to hesitate in exchanging this camera for a new one. I would be very thankful for a positive response after which I will bring that camera with me to your shop.
Note that a comma and a full stop should go directly after a word, then a space before the next word.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 07-Jun-2010 at 14:35. Reason: Typo
omg thank you , but i have a question about the letter that i write is it realted to this topic Last month you bought a new SONY camera ,but it stopped working after two weeks
because i have an exam and this will be the topic
The main idea of the letter is the same - you are disappointed with the result and you want a new camera as compensation!