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    #1

    is there any mistake?

    1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.
    2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.
    3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

    4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.

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    #2

    Re: is there any mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by happys82 View Post
    1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.
    2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.
    3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

    4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.

    Looks fine to me

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    #3

    Re: is there any mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by happys82 View Post
    1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.
    2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.
    3.These are a few of the beauties that are waiting for you if you choose us.

    4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.
    It sounds more natural to me, but I might be wrong.

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