please help me to correct my letter and make it more formal..

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annielle

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Dear F., i know a lot of time had passed since our unexpected meeting on the airport in L. However, I am so wonder how are you and how your buisness trip went, that I have to decided to write. I really hope, you managed to arrive at the place without major problems or complications and all buisness that you had planned ended with a succes.
In the end I just want to add that if you ever will need a guide or advice about Western European Countries, feel free to contact with me. I will be more than happy and with pleasure will try to provide you with valuable advices and informations.
Look forward to hear from you,
yours sincerely
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please, help me to make it grammar correct and to get rid of so many "with" words:oops:
 

misiania

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Dear F., I know a lot of time [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] has passed since our unexpected meeting [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] at the airport in L. [STRIKE]However[/STRIKE], I [STRIKE]am so [/STRIKE] was wondering how are you and how your buisness trip went,, [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] therefore (you could also use 'so' instead of therefore) I have [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] decided to write to you. I [STRIKE]really[/STRIKE] hope, you have managed to arrive at the place without any major problems or complications and all buisness that you had planned ended with a succes.
In the end I just want to add that if you will ever need a guide or advice [STRIKE]about [/STRIKE] on Western European Countries, feel free to contact [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] me. I will be more than happy [STRIKE]and with [/STRIKE][STRIKE]pleasure will try[/STRIKE] to provide you with valuable advice[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] and informations.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely
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please, help me to make it grammar correct and to get rid of so many "with" words:oops:

I am not a teacher
:)
You can't say advices with 's' . Advice is a uncountable noun and have no plural form.
 
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