want to be like a child

[gauri_agr]

hi All,

Please review and correct all the mistake in the following paragrapgh.

Thanks in advance.

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My two year old daughter loves to jump from dining table; she gets hurt and then cries. Very next moment, she forgets and does the same thing all over again. Children don’t retain any bad memory of their past. Also they are incapable of predicting about the future. They just do the things whole hearted what they find interesting at that moment. The children just live in present moment. I am all inspired with them and want to enjoy every moment like a child. I don’t want to get distracted by bad memories of my past. So if it comes I try to get involve with something depending on the time and situation like trying new recipe, writing on something new, calling up some old friends. It works for me. Enjoying every single moment is a similar practice like learning any new skill. It took me years to swim effortlessly at deep ends. And I know I will be able to enjoy the every single moment effortlessly if I keep practicing the same way the children do.
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Thanks & Regards
Gauri

 

[billmcd]

A great personal philosophy! Here are a few suggested changes.

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[gauri_agr]

thanks a lot Bill for your comments and better words for my article.