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    Question about a formulation. Thanks for your help

    Hello everyone !
    I am not too sure about the following sentences. Could someone give me some directions :)
    Cheers and thanks for your help



    Part of my course includes an internship starting after July and I am strongly committed to do it for a Brazilian NGO.

    Part of my course includes an internship starting after July which I am strongly committed to do within a Brazilian NGO

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    Re: Question about a formulation. Thanks for your help

    Quote Originally Posted by andouze View Post
    Hello everyone !
    I am not too sure about the following sentences. Could someone give me some directions :)
    Cheers and thanks for your help



    Part of my course includes an internship starting after July and I am strongly committed to do it for a Brazilian NGO. (correct)

    Part of my course includes an internship starting after July which I am strongly committed to do within a Brazilian NGO
    ===Not a teacher===

    The first one sounds okay to me.

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