(1) Congratulations! You have worked very hard and written a very
(2) I think (my opinion only) that you have used some words that
probably should be used in other kinds of sentences.
(3) I think that most native speakers would suggest that you use
(4) Maybe something like:
Although the lady felt very fearful when she entered the strange
restaurant, she immediately found the courage to act very
self-confident as she sat down and ordered a delicious dish.
(5) Be careful with the word "matron." Sometimes that means
an older woman. If you use this word, you might hurt a woman's
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