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  1. Over the top's Avatar
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    as/elctronic ones

    Hello
    I build a software for booking appointments
    Is this sentence correct
    Our goal is to make services that are presented to patients electronic ones
    or
    Our goal is to make services that are presented to patients as electronic ones


    I mean our software differs than old manual booking.
    Thanks

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    Re: as/elctronic ones

    Quote Originally Posted by Over the top View Post
    Hello
    I build a software for booking appointments
    Is this sentence correct
    Our goal is to make services that are presented to patients electronic ones
    or
    Our goal is to make services that are presented to patients as electronic ones


    I mean our software differs than old manual booking.
    Thanks
    Our goal is to provide electronic/online (?) services to patients.

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    Re: as/elctronic ones

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Our goal is to provide electronic/online (?) services to patients.
    I think they are not talking about providing 'electronic services' to patients. They are providing professional consultancy services to the patients. It is the booking of appointment that is done electronically or though the internet.

    Our goal is to provide healthcare professionals the software support to enable booking of appointments by patients to be done electronically/online.

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    Re: as/elctronic ones

    I would consider the booking of appointments to be a service, but I see your point!

    I wish my doctor's surgery would get this software so I don't have to be on the phone at 8.30am exactly trying to talk to miserable, rude receptionists about how I can possibly get an appointment that day!!

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