Student or Learner
I'm doing a project on Economic disparity, development, and why there is so much poverty.
This is my thesis statement:
"Economic disparity and development is the driving force behind all poverty, along with the dangerously augmenting world population, as it draws its roots from economic, climatic, and naturalistic means within a dangerous poverty cycle."
can you tell me if it is grammatically correct? Thanks. God Bless.