Jason7377
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I'm doing a project on Economic disparity, development, and why there is so much poverty.
This is my thesis statement:
"Economic disparity and development is the driving force behind all poverty, along with the dangerously augmenting world population, as it draws its roots from economic, climatic, and naturalistic means within a dangerous poverty cycle."
can you tell me if it is grammatically correct? Thanks.
This is my thesis statement:
"Economic disparity and development is the driving force behind all poverty, along with the dangerously augmenting world population, as it draws its roots from economic, climatic, and naturalistic means within a dangerous poverty cycle."
can you tell me if it is grammatically correct? Thanks.