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    Post urgent : please sir check my latter

    Subject : Required PhD Admission process information
    Sir
    I completed my Bachelors in computer science from Preston university Karachi and Masterís in computer science from IQRA university Pakistan, I have ten years experience in software engineering.
    Sir I see your project that is very interesting for me, I wish to provide my knowledge, skill, worth, feeling and hard working to you, I want to get benefit of your valuable knowledge and experience and become good scientism and valuable assets for my country, I want complete my PhD with you because your university provide good educational environment to student, please give me a chance for prove my skill and hard working that you desire and as per your requirement.
    Please give me PhD admission process.
    Thanking your
    Muhanmmad Fahim Aamir

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    Re: urgent : please sir check my latter

    Quote Originally Posted by fahimaamir View Post

    Subject : Required PhD Admission process information

    Dear Sir

    I completed my Bachelors in Computer Science from at Preston University, Karachi, and my Masters in Computer Science from at IQRA University, Pakistan. I have ten years' experience in software engineering.

    Sir I see Your project that is very interesting for to me. I wish would like to provide bring my knowledge, skill, worth feeling and hard working to your project. I want would appreciate the opportunity to get the benefit of your valuable knowledge and experience, and become a good scientist and a valuable assets for asset to my country. I want to complete my PhD with you because your university provides a good educational environment to for students. please I would be very grateful if you would consider giving me a the chance for to prove my that I have the skills and hard working work ethic that you require.desire and as per your requirement.

    Please give send me more information about the PhD admission process.

    Thanking your Yours faithfully

    Muhanmmad Fahim Aamir
    See above

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    Re: urgent : please sir check my latter

    Would it be better if we say ?; ...to bring in my knowledge...

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    Re: urgent : please sir check my latter

    Quote Originally Posted by euncu View Post
    Would it be better if we say ?; ...to bring in my knowledge...
    I wouldn't say that.

    I can bring knowledge and expertise to your company.
    I would like to bring my wealth of experience to the job.


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    Re: urgent : please sir check my latter

    thank you very much emsr2d2 and enucu

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