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Some people believe that the best time for a person to learn a new language is when he/she is a child. Others feel adults learn languages better and faster than children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
All over the world, people are
moreinterested toin learning a new language.
Some people believe that the right time for people to learn a non-native language is when they are children.
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Others believe adults will learn a language
sbetter and faster than children.
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I believe that childhood is the best time.
Children can learn a new language easily. Initially, it would be a tough time for them, but over the period of time, they
getadapt. For example, children go tobegin school at between 4 and 6 years. They grasp thethings slowly and maintain the pace in their early age. Then their grasping [learning?] power will increase more after theregular practice. For pre-kindergarten, the teacher teaches the Alphabet sand the numbers which will be stored in the mind. When they see the alphabet or number after a year also, automatically the vision reads the symbol and sends the signal to the brain mindwhere the symbol gets interpreted with alphabet or number. Foundation would be strong, when you learna new language is learned in thechildhood.
Adults can learn a new language faster than a child, but they are reluctant to learn the basics. Since the learning period is short, they may miss the core (for example, grammar) part of the language. For example, learning the English language between the adult and children differs vastly. Children start slowly and
study, where theylearn the basics step-by-step and move ahead. But many adults start the learning faster and skip the basics. Adults may apply the learning techniques and comparative study.[?]
ingfaster than children, but children make a huge difference using their learning skills. I conclude that thechildhood is the right time to learn new language.
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