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    can somebody check my mistakes

    1.In addition, students are given detailed information on related issues during the Civil Defence Week.
    2.Meals, which are prepared during I and II term, are determined with club students.(cooking club)
    3. Weekend sports contribute to students’ social development.
    We give students the opportunity to participate in sports and social activities through the winter schools in the autumn term.

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    Re: can somebody check my mistakes

    ***neither a teacher nor a native-speaker***

    Quote Originally Posted by happys82 View Post
    1. In addition, the students are given detailed information on the related issues during the Civil Defence Week.
    2. The meals, which are prepared during I and II (I'd prefer; the first and the second) term, are determined with the club students.(The cooking club)
    3. Weekend sports contribute to students’ social development.(If it is not a general statement, then put the definite article before weekend and students)

    We give students the opportunity( maybe not just giving opportunity but urging or endorsing as well) to participate in sports and social activities through the winter schools in the autumn term.

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    Re: can somebody check my mistakes

    The articles "the" really aren't necessary in this notice since the notice is referring to the nouns in general terms.

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