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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    google vs yahoo

    If you find any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    On the other hand, Yahoo tried to increase time consumption by the users who can create web contents through services such as 360, a blogging service, or Yahoo answers

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    Re: google vs yahoo

    ***neither a teacher nor a native-speaker***

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    On the other hand, Yahoo tried to increase time consumption by the users who can create web contents through services such as 360, a blogging service, or Yahoo answers
    My suggestion is;

    On the other hand, Yahoo tried to increase the time consumption byof the users who can by enabling them to create web contents through services such as 360, a blogging service, or Yahoo answers Yahoo! Answers.

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