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  1. Senior Member
    Student or Learner
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      • Native Language:
      • Korean
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      • South Korea
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    • Join Date: Nov 2005
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    #1

    focus on earning money

    Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally?

    While Yahoo has become an entertainmnet website by carrying a lof of adversiting, Google does not focus on making money from advertisement.


    • Join Date: Jun 2010
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    #2

    Re: focus on earning money

    The sentence is pretty clear, why do you need more natural expression of it?

  2. Newbie
    English Teacher
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      • English
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      • Australia
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      • Japan

    • Join Date: Jun 2010
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    #3

    Re: focus on earning money

    While Yahoo has become an entertainment website from displaying a lot of advertisements, Google has not focused so much on making money from carrying advertisements.

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