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    #1

    focus on earning money

    Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally?

    While Yahoo has become an entertainmnet website by carrying a lof of adversiting, Google does not focus on making money from advertisement.


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    Re: focus on earning money

    The sentence is pretty clear, why do you need more natural expression of it?

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    Re: focus on earning money

    While Yahoo has become an entertainment website from displaying a lot of advertisements, Google has not focused so much on making money from carrying advertisements.

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