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    Post Is it correct?

    As his passport doesn't has enough pages, he needs to submit it for additional booklet. So, we will give you this document when he has finished with them.

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    Re: Is it correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post
    As his passport doesn't have enough pages, he needs to submit it for an additional booklet. We will give you this document when he has finished with it.
    I have only corrected the grammar. I don't know about the content - for example I'm not sure what 'this document' refers to.

    Rover

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