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    Which one is correct?

    Hi everyone,

    Here I have 2 sentences, which one is correct? If it is not, why?

    1. Proceeding with the next issue, the chief reason might be.....................

    2. Proceeding with the next issue, I would like to give the chief reason.........

    Thanks in advance!

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    Re: Which one is correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by wang.cupid View Post
    Hi everyone,

    Here I have 2 sentences, which one is correct? If it is not, why?

    1. Proceeding with the next issue, the chief reason might be.....................
    Wrong. The second part of the sentence is unrelated to the first.
    2. Proceeding with the next issue, I would like to give the chief reason.........
    Correct.

    Thanks in advance!
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    Re: Which one is correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by wang.cupid View Post
    Hi everyone,

    Here I have 2 sentences, which one is correct? If it is not, why?

    1. Proceeding with the next issue, the chief reason might be ....

    2. Proceeding with the next issue, I would like to give the chief reason ....

    Thanks in advance!
    A string of periods of indefinite length is not a punctuation mark. It seems that you're trying to write an ellipsis (...).
    An ellipsis has three dots within a sentence, and four when it includes a closing period - never more and never less.

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