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    contiluo is offline Member
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    Exclamation sentences

    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    1. It's the power of human's great love with no boundaris that helps
    people each other.

    2. We should enhance and glorify the glorious of human nature.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: sentences

    1 No- human's seems a bit impersonal for the sentence, but that helps people each other needs another verb.
    2 I'd use glory of human nature, but it's still a bit repetitious.

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