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    sayla is offline Newbie
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    plz correct my sentence.

    This is part of my email. Before i send it out, I want to know whers is mistakes in this short paragraph. I also want to make it logically flow.

    "I am a graduate and i find that my writing is creating me quite many obstacles. That I am still writing unclear statements pass to my reader false idea of what i mean. It could be possibly blocking me from writing better English in future fields."

    plz help me. I am panicking my English writing.

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    Re: plz correct my sentence.

    Quote Originally Posted by sayla View Post
    This is part of my email. Before i I send it out, I want to know whers the is mistakes in this short paragraph. I also want to make it logically flow.

    "I am a graduate and iI find that my writing is creating me quite many obstacles. That I am still writing unclear statements pass to my reader false idea of what iI mean. It could be possibly blocking me from writing better English in future fields."

    plz Please help me. I am panicking my English writing.
    ==Not a teacher===

    Hello Sayla!

    You are in fact doing a great job!

    Keep that confidence in you always and do post if you have any queries related to the suject.

    There are many experts here to correct our errors.

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