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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Please help

    These goods were inspected at least 4th times, but results failed. After that, the goods were sent to HK due to your customs document was valid. We were non-stop to pushed you for the improved quality and reminded you that the shipment was overdue long time sine the past seven months. Finally, we were no choice to shipped the goods and trust you that they were in goods condition. Please refresh your memory

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    These goods were inspected at least 4th times, but results failed. After that, the goods were sent to HK due to your customs document was valid. We were non-stop to pushed you for the improved quality and reminded you that the shipment was overdue long time sine the past seven months. Finally, we were no choice to shipped the goods and trust you that they were in goods condition. Please refresh your memory
    I'm not totally clear on what you mean by some of it but here's my first suggested version:

    The above-mentioned goods were inspected at least four times, but failed each time. After that, the goods were sent to Hong Kong (?) because your Customs document was valid (shouldn't this be invalid?) We had continuously pushed you to improve the quality, and had reminded you that this shipment was seven months overdue. Finally, we had no choice but to ship the goods and trust that they were in good condition. Please bear this in mind in future.

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