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    wang.cupid is offline Junior Member
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    Another paragraph to check out? Thanks.

    Dear friends, the following paragraph is the last part of an essay and I want to want to make sure that it has no grammatic errors. Could you please please check it out? Thanks.

    In the final analysis, despite I would concede that adopting animals in our labs may bring about favorable features, this policy definitely undermines the well-being of animals and our moral values. Overall, it is high time that authorities, communities and people concerned strike a balance between protecting animals and killing them.

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    hemmin is offline Junior Member
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    Re: Another paragraph to check out? Thanks.

    To conclude, though i agree that using animals in the labs may bring about favourable results, yet this policy definitely undermines the right to live of any living creatures ( animal -life and plant life) and our ethical values.
    Overall, it is high time that the authorities, communities and common people strike a balance between protecting and killing of animals for selfish purpose.

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