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    constructive mind

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    Instead of giving dealth penalty, to give life sentence to sex offenders will be economically ideal. It would be more meaningful for them to learn physical labors or working skills, whic are helpful to build constructive mind.

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    Re: constructive mind

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any problems in the following sentence , can I have your comments?

    Instead of giving the dealth penalty, to give sentencing life sentence to sex offenders to life will would be economically ideal.

    It would be more meaningful useful for them to learn physical labors or working employment skills, which are helpful to build a constructive mind.
    See above.

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    Re: constructive mind

    Instead of the dealth death penalty, sentencing sex offenders to life would be economical.
    This is not acceptable sentence; you want sex offenders to be free? They deserve to be killed with stones.

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