bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
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- South Korea
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Instead of giving dealth penalty, to give life sentence to sex offenders will be economically ideal. It would be more meaningful for them to learn physical labors or working skills, whic are helpful to build constructive mind.
Instead of giving dealth penalty, to give life sentence to sex offenders will be economically ideal. It would be more meaningful for them to learn physical labors or working skills, whic are helpful to build constructive mind.